I Want To Be

I Want To Be

 

I want to be the number one
In someone’s eyes
The one they go to first
They wake up thinking of me
And the last person on their mind at night

 

I want to be the one where he can’t stand being away
From me more than minutes
The only one that he runs to
Puts me in his arms
And looks into my eyes

 

I want to be the one that he kisses
Passionately each time
The only one that he can’t wait to see
That can make me laugh
And have tons of fun with

 

I want him to be the one that fills my heart
With trust and happiness
The only one that can put the pieces together
Kiss away the wounds
And make me his everything

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

I want him to be the one that fills my heart
With trust and happiness
The only one that can put the pieces together
Kiss away the wounds
And make me his everything

I really love this poem ended. Your want is really understood here. QP you know how I feel about your writing and where it has gone. I continue to get blown away by each piece. Thanks!

[John Stussy]

Your romantic longing is powerful, you speak of a beautiful love you wish to call your own. You've portrayed it effortlessly it seems, talking of the quiet moments and what truly matters in that connection with another. If a dork like myself has been able to find this kind of romance, then I have every confidence that you can as well. Keep writing and stay positive.

[deeps]

I want to be the one where he can't stand being away
From me more than minutes
The only one that he runs to
Puts me in his arms
And looks into my eyes

I so loved these lines here,
This is such a wonderful write here,
I can feel this one.
Very well expressed.

[Bud]

Whew! I think you have just nailed what every person wants. Not much more to say about that. We all want this. Excellent! As always.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats so beautiful, I am sure it will happen, if not already did, cause many would like you to be their Number 1, you deserv to be :) Yossi