This Life We Live

This Life We Live
I heard once that
Happiness comes to those
Who care more
Because it fills the heart
I’ve been learning that each day

 

I continue to let you in
And I want nothing more
Than to have this with you
You make me so happy
But am I making the right choice?

 

I miss you so much
A day doesn’t go by
Where I don’t think about you
How your life is going
And if your doing okay..

 

We use to talk each day
But now months go by
My heart aches to see you
I just want you back here
Why do you have to live there?

 

Everyday I see people suffering
I see them reaching out for help
But sometimes they don’t receive it
Because others are too busy to see
And that’s why they are in this mess

 

I use to cry myself to sleep every night
Because nothing ever went right
And shredding tears was the only peace
Only my pillow would ever see
But now I laugh more than before

 

The closest people to me
Are my loving family
Without them I couldn’t be
I fall, they are the only ones catching me
And their love is so rare

 

Outside of my family
You’re the closest one
But I see you sinking in smoke
Your oh so young
And nothing I say changes you

 

Everyone wants love
So why is it so hard to find
Some don’t know what it is
They never can receive it
So they give up..

 

This life we live
Is truly unforgettable
We breath in the memories
Take a chance at everything
And sometimes we all fall down
But there’s always something underneath you..

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

There are so many lovely things here
Happiness comes to those who care,I always knew that
So many people suffering ,always reaching out for help they never receive
for others are so busy to see or even care,thats why the mess we always live and see
used to cry myself to sleep for nothing ever went right,shedding tears at least brings me some peace
This is the best part ,i think..sometimes we fall down but there is always something underneath you..loved this part
I really loved this,some lovely thoughts ,lovely words and sentiments
lovely write..

[Bud]

I can feel this one, Kylie. I really can. I love your style, your honesty you pour out in each of your pieces. It's hard being apart from the one holding your heart. And in that distance it more difficult on making decisions as what to do. Time is the answer keeper. And with that it does not give up answers easily. Take it each day for all it's worth. Be prepared for the long haul, but be prepared for sudden turns, derailments. They do happen. Be sure that whoever you invest your heart in, will invest an equal amount back. You deserve nothing less than that, Kylie. Whether it is online or face to face. Do not let another touch and ruin such a beautiful soul...

[deeps]

This life we live
Is truly unforgettable
We breath in the memories
Take a chance at everything
And sometimes we all fall down
But there's always something underneath you..

I so love these lines here,
I can really feel this write,
Been there quite a few times.
Such a emotional write, Very well written.

[cest la vie]

"This life we live
Is truly unforgettable
We breath in the memories
Take a chance at everything
And sometimes we all fall down
But there's always something underneath you..

Very powerful lines her that just shout to the world.. I really enjoyed this and loved the way when read, it just was smooth and flowing.

Nicely done!!