Falling Down

Falling Down
This heart of mine
Is so weak tonight
Theses eyes of mine
Just keep leaking tears
This soul of mine
Is so lonely tonight
These cries aren’t heard
Because I keep them silent
My heart is so cold
I need anyone’s warmth
I’ve been falling down
And nothing is catching me
I can’t fight this feeling off
I just want to escape this
Nothing is worse than
Feeling this loneliness
 

Reviews

[Ashlee]

This is beautifully written. It shows a lot of emotion. I can strongly relate to this. Very nice flow.

[deeps]

such emotion in this, well expressed tho!

[Star Shyne]

Great poem, nice flow. I'm always alone, and its not fun. I loved this poem, and enjoyed it very much. Great job.