Broken, Again..

Broken, Again..

My heart is broken

Because of what you did

But I have not cried

I’m trying to be strong

Keeping it all inside

Ignoring all the feelings

Controlling my emotions

Because if I shred a tear

It will prove you’ve won

You never will, ever

My heart is tearing inside me

That’s one thing I can’t overlook

Because I can feel it pulling apart

And every time it beats

It breaks even more

All the memories are in my mind

Thinking of all we’ve did together

But now all my thoughts are dark about you

All the time we spent

The flowers you bought me

The way you held me

Kissing my lips like never before

All the late nights we had

Was all for nothing..

Nothing..

I’m trying to make sense of it all

But its just making me think more

I’ve let another in my heart

And once they get inside

They destroy it, the first chance they get..

Reviews

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beautiful and sad ...

[deadly healer]

awwww. it feels full of innocence and sorrow. i loved it.

[A.Lee]

This is very good. It well describes the pattern of heartbreak. It happens, we mend, it happens, we mend and we get stronger. Good work.

[Silere]

As often in life, our hearts break.. mend.. and break again. It's through the kind of strength that you have shown here that we pick ourselves up...and allow our hearts to open once again...risking all. Keep writing from your heart.. it suits you so well. Thank you for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life seem unfair. The sweet moment can be overtook by heart brake. Your story and description was sad. In time the good moment overtake the bad time and we learn to appreciate when true love comes into a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fleet]

Heartbreaking, but passionate poem.
Just keep your head up and keep moving...things will get better.

[Haifa]

its sad to know you have broken heart again but you will get over and it seems you are getting over it in the first 7 lines but then I was wrong, it shows that you are trying to act that you are fine but inside you is just so sad.anyway, well done.

[Huggy Bear]

I like this poem alot. It speaks volumes:)

[smiley:)]

Hey Quite Poet,
This is powerful and moving, I love it, although it is very heart wrenching, that's the power it holds. You're very good at pulling at people's heart strings. I hope you have not had your heart broken, you'll go somewhere with your writing.
~Smiley :)

[Spoken]

strong expression. A feeling I know well and you've captured it excellently.