Wander

my mind wanders so now and then
to most beautiful places existing
it wanders when it can
ongoing conversations desisting

never wanting to leave there
as it feels like home
needing to breathe that air
when my mind goes around to roam

without consent
it brings me to the ugliest of all
there where my energy gets spent
making me prone to fall

struggling against it is no use
as this force is too strong
there is no way to cut myself loose
for this is my endless song


Ess

Author's Note

Hi! I tried something different this time. Don't be too harsh on me please :) Thanks for reading and I hope you have fun.

~Quiettlove

Reviews

[Ayushi Jha]

A very strong poem. You are left with a sinking feeling towards the end . Applaudable. The style of this poem is intriguing in itself, very unique. Will read more :)

[Quiettlove]

Thank you so so much Ayushi Jha, means a lot to me! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again for reading and taking the time to write a review. I centainly hope you'll enjoy more pieces coming :)