SKY DANCING

Its perking stillness sits before us
cardboard skies and painted blue sighs
that heaves us like cacophony miffs

We'll slip through the fingers of ennui
Terpsichore gloriously whirls outside
as we watch the winds of sapient dance

Forever is not enough, muted are we
as gestures that sway across the skies
we are the powerful suffixes closure articulates

© Rena Scribe 2009

Author's Note

Just grateful for My space account, forgot this was on the blog.


If anyone cares to point the slight modification. Just holler!

Reviews

[Kelley]

Beautiful piece Rena thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[Michael X]

mind expanding. "suffixes closure articulates" such an amazing monument of knowledge and open thinking. Amazing job

[deeps]

This is just one amazing write here. I really throughly enjoye this write.
Such a wonderful flow as well.

[cecil]

truly a beautiful imagination flows within your mind and heart though it may be sad and weary,though with imagination that is yours,sadness will not last for long,,,Imagining dancing creatures,,,Blessings..Cecil

[Michael X]

wow, you are a work of art, and poetry spills from your bottle of ink like a waterfall and i love the way you interpret the heart, this has a flow to capture reason, and beauty. i can't wait to reread this