Invisible

Just a random piece of writing.

I walk in broad daylight,yet appear as a shadow.
I speak louder than most, yet am heard like a wisper on the wind.
My image is always on show, yet it passes your eyes without a glance.
I share my views,voice my opinion, yet it yields no response.
I make contact,yet recieve no reply.

I walk, I talk, I breath, I drink.
I face the same Dawn as everyone else.
Every sun will set on me as it does on you.
I remember faces,yet mine is blank to everyone surrounding me.
Ive loved so many, yet been loved by so few.
I could change the world with a single idea, but you all ignore.

Has the world become a shallow place?
Have you become an self centered human being?
Has ignorence become the latest fashion?
Is the human race only concerned with itself?
Who am I to you?

Its simple, to you and everyone around...............

I am the Invisible Man.

Reviews

[Magdelena]

WOW! I really enjoyed this! You took something many go through. suffer each day, and made it into a work of art.. Fantastic job!




Magdelena

[Ama May Cooper]

I loved this piece one that possed the use of description in limits, which ive never seen used quite so well. The repetivie start adding some sorta drum beat toward a climax i thought this wonderful keep writing

[Maylea]

I actually really liked that. You got a good message through and it flowed really well.

[ruth]

I really like your poem, and the point you tried to make throughout it.
I love how you wrote what you do and how others respond to it.
-ruth