Sijo (It's not supposed to have a title, uh)

A korean format of poetry =)

And I would light you a fire and I would show you the way

If you walk with me for a while, I will tell you stories and tales

And if you don't heed my call, I shall take my path and let you stray…

 

Author's Note

Sijo, the older format, consists of three line with 14-16 syllables each, introduces a situation in line 1, development in line 2, and twist and conclusion in line 3.

Or something like that =)

Reviews

[CLM]

Checks out, you followed the form.

The conclusion is inconclusive in that it makes the assumption of only one true path, which is always false.

[Haibar Zair]

Conclusion is concluding that of the only one path, the unknown, the one lost, will never be found if you don't understand the signs or heed the messiah

[CLM]

exactly my point