My Soul In Rhyme

Over the forest

Beneath the stars

I made a conclusion of love

Where the poetic eyes hovers

When the bird takes lift in dim air

When rain touches the leaves

Soaks the mahogany, thus

Thousand pen paints its beauty, I dropped

My heart there.

 

Adore how their rhyme flows

In the lake where my heart sop

And

That’s when I know

I’m hiding from the world

At a certain rune

Entering souls

Just to fill the blank space

Of one I own.

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Author's Note

My name : Lenah
( For the book poem compilation )

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

I knew you would be a gem :-) This poem just is my cup of coffee(because i hate tea) ... :p.. Vivid imagery,underlying meaning to your words.Good metaphor of flowing brook.... Everything screams perfection here .You have got magic in your words. its sweet and innocent.Let your talent be untouched sweetie. Stay raw.. and love TS :).. ~xoxo~

~Sophy

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much Sophy ! :-* :) ;)))

[Sophy Freebirds]

;-):-* Pleasure n***a

[Confuser]

It is beautiful. My favorite of your so far. Lovely metaphors and the flow is amazingly worded. thank yuo.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so so much !! :)) really glad !

[Confuser]

Lenah: much better; didn't know who you were! Whatever.....y/w

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Gorgeous :) This is a very ethereal piece and I wholly enjoyed reading it. There was just one line that kind of caused some confusion for me: "In the lake where my heart sop" It just didn't seem to flow well with the rest of the poem, plus I'm not entirely sure what you meant by sop :P Other than that - beautiful. This is probably one of my favorite poems by you

[Lenah Mehzabin]

haha no problem ! the word ''sop '' is a synonym of '' '' getting wet or Soak '' ..i used it as it goes with lake ? ..hope now u wikl get it ! and thanks for your kind read !! :-)