Wish

It's about freedom for love

Along the Horizon

Where cloud touches the perk of Sierra

Her soft and silky

Seductive side

Melts mount

She slowly enters inside his soul

He grabs her by waist

She moves her hand all around his neck

Who knows what they whisper for so long

My eyes only captured their love and preserved in notes.

 

Nature has it’s beauty

Because it empowered a home for every loving soul

A freedom

Where they are not ashamed to get lost

In each other’s arm for centuries and more

 

I wish

Standing in human streets

If I find a magic stick

I will turn broken Juliets in clouds

Romeos in hills

Forever they will love

And I will enjoy the peace .

 

ReD(27.01.15)

Posting on( 28.01.15)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and wish.
"I wish
Standing in human streets
If I find a magic stick
I will turn broken Juliets in clouds
Romeos in hills
Forever they will love
And I will enjoy the peace "
Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love and hope.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! It means a lot ! : )

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[anne]

I wish
Standing in human streets
If I find a magic stick
I will turn broken Juliets in clouds
Romeos in hills
Forever they will love
And I will enjoy the peace .
................Wow...an awesome piece..:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much dear !!.Loved to see after long time : )

[ms. barrie]

there's a sense of tranquillity and subtle profound ness (not sure that's
a word); to this write, that renders your mind to wander whilst reading this.
very beautiful in its eloquence...thank you for sharing (:

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much!I'm glad you liked it ! :))

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome...it was a pleasure to read :)

[leppero]

very decent offering, Lady. great narrative, paints a nice picture, emotional and nice rhythm, I like the way it changes slightly for the third fourth an fifth line. there's one thing, very small, and that is when your talking about one cloud, it touches., but when your talking about clouds, they touch

anyhow, pleasure to read, nice one

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much. I'm sorry for grammatical error.I've fixed it : )

[leppero]

I think you're right, when you say cloud it can mean a bunch of clouds or just one. good stuff, glad I could be of some help, that stuff (grammar) still confuses me sometimes

[R Smith]

beautiful writing ReD, 'forever they will love and i will enjoy the peace' you write with a sensitive charm and a clear desire to bring joy to the world, lovely work :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much.I appreciate your nice words : )

[Leviathus Fortes]

A wish for love.

What a wonderful wish to have.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you . May your wish come true

[Astrid]

Lovely, though I have one note:
"Nature have it’s beauty"
Maybe change to "Nature has it's beauty"?

[Lenah Mehzabin]

oh i 'm really sorry for such a mistake.
I should have checked it !
I will correct that error
Thank you ! :)

[Astrid]

No problem ^-^ glad to help ~

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very impressive.......!!!
very beautiful.......
brilliant writing!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much !! : ))

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

beautiful way of describing and the way you used your words are fantastic......... keep writing and keep it up =)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank You so much dear ! : ))

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Pleasure =)

[DoormanDan]

This poem has a style to it that I haven't seen in any other song or poem before. The atmosphere you generated with the picture, font color, and set up of the poem works perfectly. Fantastic job! :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I
m really glad : )

[Cool Girl]

Stated quite beautifully! Wonderful, spectacular, absolutely astonishing! Amazing job, my friend:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much dear I loved your words ! : )

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)