evil and light

i woke up one morning feeling alittle demonic on the light vrsion i just swoped out a few words

Torcher is a game for all to hear,

creatures of the night,

bloodshed by tears,

beholding the lost,

bring back the forgotten,

mold them into mine,

like thread made by cotton,

Demons that rush,

The deadly adrenaline

To have a full rush

I would give up anything

I wanna hears the howls in the night

As much pain as I can

Death is one thing

I completely understand

death is best gain,

when pleasure for the dead,

gains control of thy body,

like a bullet to the head,

just break down to the knees,

give evil full control,

give Satan my heart,

I give Satan my soul,

　

love is a game for all to hear,

creatures of the light,

No bloodshed no tears,

beholding the lost,

bring back the forgotten,

Give them a new life

like thread made by cotton,

Love is best gain,

If its through words that’s been said

Show how you feel

kind feelings over again

just break down to the knees,

give hope full control,

i give Jesus my heart,

i give Jesus my soul,

Author's Note

im not satinist

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

I take it you are young.I am taking that in mind with this review.I think you did an excellent job.I can hear these lyrics being sung by a hardcore band but this is their one dark slow song with ghostly organ in the background.I would not have thought you satinist from this poem.This is a classic tale of good and evil fighting for a lost soul.I wrote a poem once from the eyes of a murderer,but I would never kill anyone.The best writers are able to put themselves in someone elses place.