time to die

i was fiddleing with a peice of paper and this is what i got

looking high up in the sky

wondering what its like to die

dodging every deathly test

grim reaper preparing me for rest

drowning in a pool of my own tears

deprived from happiness most of my years

a souless life with out a heart

taking chances with a throw of the darts

time is wasting death is near

its my time to die it seems so clear

hidding within the darkest part of the mind

 the numbers on the clock will start to unwind

time is up its time to die this life is over

now ill say goodbye

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

ohhhH!!! it was so good until the last line!!! it didnt rhyme!! maybe u could try.... hidding within the darkest part of the mind, the numbers on the clock will start to unwind time is up its time to die this life is over ill say goodbye....

or something like that??? you can make it rhyme or use mine!! it would be so much better if it ended in a rhyme!

[glabby]

wow