MY CORPSE

not my favorite one but i'll put it on here anyway

deeper in the darkness i plunge in my heart

for the taste of my soul is ever so tart

with deathly screams in a hallow shell

blazing on fire through the gates of hell

wandering barefoot as i watch my blood drip

gashes on my body and ice on my lips

for as i walk through the darkness it eats at my life

soaking in thorns and gain all my strife

i wander then wait for for i say my last prayer

a fog forms around me with a heavy mist in the air

with the only light in my hand a bright glowing torch

i finnally drop down to forever be a corpse

Reviews

[Rendawg]

if any one has an idea to replace that line with please tell me
i dont like it mush either

[GreenSkeleton16]

I love this one!!!!!!! what do u mean u dont like it! i outta slap you! haha i dont like this line "soaking in thorns and gain all my strife" edit that part but i love it!!!!!!

[Rendawg]

yeah still dont like it =(