Lost dream

I gaze - mind wistful -

On a lost dream, beset by

Hallucinations

Of a stolen future we

Could have enjoyed together.

Reviews

[nocool]

Where moon lit dust drifts lost and alone


Dreams of what could have been
fall
dancing upon spring breeze to earths hungry ground

where
silver light of the moon
kisses good-bye
falling to the ground
light dances to death
by vision and no sound


There is a silent kiss to the ear
and how i wish there was no fear

but
as tomorrow fades into yesterday
i blow a kiss into the stars
with hopes someday
my kiss finds you

with one last kiss
one only..

last the forever taste of what could have been
the love of forever dance with tangled lips
where my home is found in your arms once again

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Great write dude...
hope you don't mind my add :)
I like to start a training write... where one person writes..
someone adds... then another.. then another...
pretty soon.. it grows beyond anything anyone could imagine.

[R.M.C]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for adding your own little bit... It's nice to see what my writing evokes in others.

[nocool]

;)
agree.. I have friends on sites.. and we tag write like this alot..