Blackbird & the Sparrow

Blackbird
singing a ghostly song
In daylight is hushed
Night falls
nothing else is heard
But a melody
played off key
Till along came a sparrow
to comfort thee
When all thought was lost
the music played
So very soft
as the kiss of tiny wings
on an early morning breeze.

copyright 2018 by RW Erskine

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Reviews

[Cherrie]

So gracefully written. What a great coupling of black bird and sparrow. I always enjoy the steady rhyme you write with. Very nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing story told in the poetry. You made me believe your words and thoughts. I saw the sparrow and the blackbird. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[RW Erskine]

sometimes the simpler the better when one can convey so much with so little words.
thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem and you are welcome.