Rearview Mirror

Rearview Mirror

A Poem by Rac7hel

With all the smoke in my eyes 
I look through the rearview mirror
And stare, through the rain and fog,
directly at the sun.

Mira
Don't you ever wish that you could 
spend one day away from the sky?
Hasta esta noche, patiently 
I wait for your reply...

© 2015 Rac7hel


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It certainly is very pretty, the description is lovely & I loved the occasional Spanish. It set the tone for the poem. Keep writing. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


It is pretty. Has a nice visual to it. I like it. A bit peaceful feeling. One of the best short poems I've read in awhile. Kudos.

Posted 17 Years Ago


...this is very simplistic...but amazing none the less...I'm not sure why but I loved this. Twas gorgous.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on April 20, 2008
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Rac7hel
Rac7hel

New Orleans, LA



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I'm Rachel, more commonly known as Rac7hel around these here internets. I write pretty poetry and take pretty pictures... I try my damnedest to play pretty music. I do other stuff but I'll save that f.. more..