A Side Line Glance

The rain is gorgeous,

And I am crying.

Salty tears,

Falling down the curves of my cheeks.

Puddles forming.

At the bottom,

A glistening glow.

A shimmer.

A side line glance.

Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice poem and imagery. It gives a nice picture and it is a beautiful poem.

[Moon]

Fragile, but beautiful. Your words strike a bit of sadness into the readers heart.

[Edward Lancheister]

good imagery that you written through the lines of words "Salty tears, Falling down the curves of my cheeks" like see the sketch of crying person

thanks for share

[willweb]

This was beautiful. Sad, but it felt of a soft sadness. I really enjoyed this today.

[Rachael]

Thank you,