The End

An Acrostic

 

T rue love’s light was my salvation,

H elpless when finally spoken;

E nduring this mistake alone.

 

E clectic evils then took hold.

N othing will stop this spiral now.

D arkness spills total damnation.

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Rach, this was brilliant. Loved this "Nothing will stop this spiral now...Darkness spills Damnation" Excellently executed.

[Edmond Dantes]

"Nothing Will Stop This Spiral Now"

Nothing will stop this spiral now
Eclectic evils then took hold
Enduring this mistake alone
Helpless when finally spoken upon
Darkness spills total damnation
True love's light was my salvation.


*your words, just mixed up the order and created sumum new. hope you like it- it's yours keep it. The End was interesting, a different effort from you. As you can tell my favorite line that you created was "Nothing will stop this spiral now" -you lines in here were really thought out to have that overwhelming effect, it worked perfectly.

[Lily1111]

What a clever acrostic poem. You have a knack for this style.
I really liked the last line: "Darkness spills total damnation."

[EleanaNouvelle]

The End, very clever...loved it! Good luck on your new manuscript.