The Truth

You are just a lifetime

and split heartbeat away;

forever now it seems.

Never to be in sync

within the orchid glove

of this unparalleled love.

 

Total unfairness;

given to harass

and tear apart all threads

pre-destined from above.

 

Crude links are left scattered

and cripple every walkway,

crying out for efforts

from powerless desires;

now unable to relay.

 

Limbs find their final halt.

All other organs, too,

with last glance at that view;

nice back, thick and strong.

Its stance proclaims my fault,

in denial of your wrong.

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

I absolutely love this poem. My favorite stanza is this one, though I love them all....
Crude links are left scattered
and cripple every walkway,
crying out for efforts
from powerless desires;
now unable to relay.

You write so eloquently and you paint a vivid picture for the reader. Terrific!!!

[Wildecat]

An amazing write, a pleasure to read this poem.

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LOL I like this one a lot. It has a nice meter and i like the content. It kept my interest which is not easy to do...so good job.

[EleanaNouvelle]

Your Truth poem was wonderful! Eleana

[Antonio Valentino]

Rachelle, this was amazing.
One of my favorites of your's for sure.
Nice to see you back in the groove again.

Rich