Forever Forest

I can hear the words again

It only gets worse every time

It will never end I’m sure

But it’s alright now

We’ll be lost in the forest of forever

Together we walk

Down the endless paths

Never ending

Never knowing

Never seeing our end in sight

But it’s alright

Now we’ll take one last step

And fall over the edge

Hand in hand

We can make it together

Do you trust me?

Reviews

[A]

I really like this poem! I like the idea of "forest of forever." Very catchy. Great poem! :)

[Bree]

The last line seriously gets me. Do you trust me? I trust my instincts telling me that you're a great writer. I love your style, and how you space everything.