Have you ever felt...

Have you ever felt...

A Poem by Rachel

Have you ever felt like if you can’t be everything they want, that they will go find it somewhere else. That you will be left in the dust because someone else can offer what you can’t?



Do you feel that you sacrifice your time and energy to be what this person wants yet it’s still never going to be enough. That in a split second, their feelings will change and you will be sitting in your own pain and shame for not being worthy of being chosen?


Have you felt the rush of emotions that come over you when you get the slightest bit of positive attention and also when you get the slightest bit of negative or no attention at all?


Do you care enough about me not to hurt me in the end? To be concerned about my feelings? Or is this just a one sided love affair?


Have you felt anything for me at all?

Do you like me the way I like you?

Have you wanted to be in my company the same way I crave to be in yours?

Do you even notice the way I look at you, touch you, talk to you?


Have you ever felt wanted?

Do you want to feel special?

Have you ever felt…at all.

© 2025 Rachel


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I agree with Randall,
people here are hurting others who have no compassion, they barely use their heart.
World lacks good people like us, empaths, loving humans. But life has a way in showing us who is here for us even if it's not now.

Been here, done all of this, hurt and felt like life was the end. But looking back life took a turn and everything is better. And I know one day, you will be to, just like I survived! Hugs, keep well dear.🙏🏻❤️
~Amy

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree with Randall,
people here are hurting others who have no compassion, they barely use their heart.
World lacks good people like us, empaths, loving humans. But life has a way in showing us who is here for us even if it's not now.

Been here, done all of this, hurt and felt like life was the end. But looking back life took a turn and everything is better. And I know one day, you will be to, just like I survived! Hugs, keep well dear.🙏🏻❤️
~Amy

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rachel, what you described is sadly out there, people without compassion for others. Too lazy to look further into a person's heart.
Don't give up, don't let their indifference stop you. One day, you will meet someone who will step in close to your heart. and fall in.
Keep writing with your heart on your sleeve.

Randall...



Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rachel

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your kind and understanding words!

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Added on December 11, 2025
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Rachel

Rockledge , FL



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New here, not new to heartbreak. Just looking for somewhere to post my words as they just sit in my phone otherwise. more..