Limerick Trace

 

                             John wanted to kick Trace.

                             He couldn’t decide the place.

                             The hand or the neck,

                             The leg or the back,

                             It’s a limerick, he decided to go with the face.

                          

Reviews

[Akashi]

I felt the emotion, hee hee. Maybe it should have been the throat?

[Brandon S. Whitten]

have yet to write a limerick. Good read and write.

[Ency Bearis]

This made me smile, nice one.

[Kitten]

Haha. I love writing limericks. This made me laugh. I love it. Good job!

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh! Ouch! Cute limerick (though not sure that "neck" and "back" are strong enough rhymes for a true limerick) Good attempt - keep writing!

[Pink Witch]

I have another version, with kick and limerick as BB. But this one kinda rolled in the mouth. Can you give me your opinion ? I'll send the other one to you, if its okay :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Absolutely!

[Alli]

:) lol! I made a limerick about my brothers messy room once :P

[Pink Witch]

Ha ha ... That's a nice topic to write limerick
Did you get the kick :p

[Alli]

lol no. :) My mom thought it was very funny. :)

[Pink Witch]

haha :)