slung

slung between the worlds of my elders

and the dreams of my youngers

with nothing but an inexplicable thirst

for love as an anchor

i drift....

                    ...an interstellar sailor

as god tirelessly tailors my soul into sails.

Reviews

[Anne Martin]

I like that a lot. I'm curious about your use of 'interstellar.' Your content seems a little more metaphysical and dreams rather than science fiction. I like the phrase, but I just wonder if there is a better word that refers to dream worlds (inner space) rather than outer space.

[Gandré]

this is sweet and you blend variety of cosmic fantasy this is also about having a connection with the universe.

[Touché Armada]

Hrmmm, I'd like to know that why is it when I rate a piece at 100% it shows somthing different?
GTJ any ideas on that? Sorry perhaps not the best place to ask questions but its bugging me.

[Touché Armada]

Short and very very sweet, it's very effective, and quite powerful,. And it has a peace to it, its nice I like it not really much I can say other than show apreciation =)