Civil Servent

Trying for alliteration.

 

Stalking, sliding, slithering through grasses, incessantly

Seeking some soft spot of shameful insecurities; insistently

Stretching forked sensors, slashing straight for the strike.

Stabbing, sinking, sharply savage fangs obsessively snide,

Shaping scurrilous statements of sinister inhumanness.

Shedding supple skin for the scaled skinned likeness,

Staring spitefully shiftily as an ambiguous civil servant

Somehow insidious this shifting soulless serpent .

Author's Note

I am trying for alliteration, any suggestions on the style and/or punctuation very much appreciated.

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

Stretching forked sensors, slashing straight for the strike.