End of the Line

If the word's don't rhymn, is it still poetry? If the thought is not pretty, is it still prose?

 

There is this...

 This emptiness that sits

 In back of a dark bus

Waiting for…

 

Her to stumble

Head long into the

Empty seat as the bus

Jerks away…

 

People stare for that second

Then return to their papers,

Their plots, their thoughts

Take old…

 

Routes past windows

Like broken lifes

Boarded up against

Hungry rats…

 

Eating hope away

Until the soft, harden

Or become dinner

For vultures…

 

Waiting patiently...

At the last stop

End of the line

Everyone off…

 

Author's Note

Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

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Although many argue that there are "forms" of poetry and "styles" of prose, for me, any composition used effectively would feel poetic. Keep writing. As a humble suggestion, if you choose your breaks in a different way, this write will resonate closer to the reader's mind. I enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing.