The Drunken Bat

Limerick

The Drunken Bat
by Rainbowco

There was a bat named Buttercup
On many a vein he did sup
But on one dark night
A drunk he did bite
Now all he can do is hiccup

Author's Note

Just for fun, my first limerick!

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

A laugh, whether true to form or somewhere outside the norm, is still a laugh; and this piece did cause me to laugh. Thank you.

[Susan S.]

I commend you on your effort. You've done what apparently no one else on Writer's Cafe is capable of: You've got the humorous twist at the end. That is very hard to do.

The other aspects of a limerick didn't fare as well. Check out "Laughing Limerick" for the standards for making limericks.

[she makes me weird]

HAHA! Oh my goodness, this is a real "knee slapper"! It makes perfect sense and is so silly. I really enjoyed it!