Spring Haiku X

Spring Haiku X

A Poem by Rainbowco
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Haiku

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smoky blue twilight
wind teasing the tall grasses
the sound of rain sticks

© 2008 Rainbowco


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Great imagery here...it's hard to "paint the picture" with such a restrictive form and so few words...which is why I love haiku :) I like the alliteration in line 2 and the last image, rain sticks, is pretty cool. I imagine sticks of rain, not rain sticking

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Rainbowco
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