Haiku II

Crow Haiku

 

i watch the black crow

in the upper most branches...

looking into me

 

 

color of purple

atop a pine the crow sits...

gun barrel cold rain

 

 

cold morn’s gray dawning...

across the far horizons

a murder of crows

 

 

 

the crow’s cawing

muted by foggy silence

drizzles on the wind

Author's Note

Crows Haiku, Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

[dale]

wow, i see you really going somewhere w/your haiku and publication. all great. i see that black crow "looking into me" also!!! you have this style down, observe nature... haiku will come in a split second

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Very well composed Haiku, or a poem in a group of haiku(s). Very interesting. Thank you for sharing

[Thomas James Martin]

Simply wonderful! You have expresses some images a nd feelings that I have experienced similarly before.
Excellent!

Tom

[Legion]

I hate crows. They take up my airspace. Good haikus though. :)