Spring Haiku XIV

Haiku

dull sunless morning

steel gray clouds settling low

red geranium

 

Author's Note

I normally do not explain my Haiku, but this one is kind of like the infamous refrigerator haiku, so something regarding my write.

From early spring until late fall I have a single red geranium sitting on a bench by my little pond and when the day is cloudy with rain, the red shines out so beautifully.
Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

[Illegitimate Artist]

I know they're short but I really think the haiku format lets you get into the writer's head.
You've got lovely imagery for so few words to work with. I can almost feel the chilly sprng breeze or maybe thats just wishful thinking cause its like 90 degrees now lol
Any how, love your work!

[Gema]

This is very diffrent but sweet and meaningful!