Summer Haiku VII

Haiku

 

wrens by the dozens

shelter in the twisted tree...

a flutter of leaves

 

Author's Note

Review as you will. Thank you

Reviews

[Ari]

I love haiku, but they are usually not visual enough for me. I can really see the wrens in this poem, and moreover, I actually find that I care about them and about their twisted tree.

[Lily1111]

This is a wonderful Haiku. I loved the imagery of "a flutter of leaves". That was so creative and such a perfect final line.

[Nicholas Hallows]

In my opinion this is a really successful haiku.
I liked the slight rhyme (more of an assonance I suppose) of tree and leaves. it is something rarely seen in haiku but I think it works well.
I also like the image of the twisted tree and the fluttering leaves.
Nice!