Let go

He stared into her eyes as her emotions poured
Into his soul. Her eyes welled with tears and
Ran down there rosy cheeks. There fingers
Found there way to each other and tangled
Together. There lips singing a song of there
Own. There hips gently touching, dancing to
The beat of there hearts. There bodies in sync
Leaving all the worries of life behind.
 

Reviews

[BeautyFromTheEarth93]

This is my favorite! Dancing and love all together in one!

[jennifer]

Very beautiful, life and loved ones, we live, we love, we die. Only few find there true love and pass so gracefully.

[Alayna]

I love it it reminds me of my baby's i love when this happens!!!!


***Love Alayna***

[Sakura Uchiha]

i think this is cool but it remind me of when my love left can't wait to read more

[Cece]

my mind did race wildly there is some hint of the erotic. continued to look for more

[Otter]

There, They're, & Their sound alike but are not interchangable. Still good writing, keep it up.