Forgotten

The wind blows through my hair a the sun sets
Before me. My dress flows in the breeze and
The cool air sends a shiver down my spine.
I settle my self in the lush green grass which
Forms to my body. The flowers tangle with
My hair as if they are dancing in the wind.
The birds song is music to my ears and my
Emotions fill me with warmth. I know that
Like all things this will soon change but
The time spent in my special field will never
Be forgotten.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! Beautiful..
And lovely imagery .
"The time spent in my special field will never
Be forgotten."-Awesome line
and I loved it to the deepest extend! :)

[BeautyFromTheEarth93]

very beautiful! you almost wrote the whole thing in iambic pentameter! :)

[Valorie J. Shearer]

Love this! I enjoy the escape for a brief moment.. Take care~~~

[LostCauze[:P]]

Very Descriptive and Enjoyable. I can relate to this piece because sometimes you just wanna close your eyes and get away. This piece did exactly that and i was able to escape for .5 seconds of reality. Thanks for the good read. :P

[youngwriter222]

beautiful, your field is where you go to get away and it brings a picture to your mind when you read it of this field full of colorful flowers and green grass.'
the poem is lovely
~Sarah

[Lewis Solo]

Simply beautiful.

[Alayna]

i loved it!!! the field is like your escape! i loves the mental pic !!!


***Alayna***