The Man Inside The Man

There is another man that lies beneath.

 There is an Id beyond the man
Who stands with his hands and heart open;
Returned to the predilection that calms
His soul and penetrates dreams.

Stretching his mind past the times
When love strayed in the days of
Stormy clouds of colors and melodies
Of rhythms off- tune; love blooms again.

Captured thoughts that brought him
To this place of peace and closeness of space
That takes flight with heights unknown.
For He who refuses to let love pass by again
Encapsulate his gift with swiftness and aplomb.

Gentle as she knows him yet profound to the world,
Gliding faithfully with the universe
---allowing God blessings to unfold.

He stands in peace to relinquish control
From the Man inside the Man who has
Gained wisdom from time passed; alas
He silences the Id and takes her hand.

-Raine

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Good for him, I know someone like that, in fact I know several! I like the way you have put this together Raine, good form and lasting thoughts for your reader. Clear and concise prose and beautiful sentiments.
Cheers,

Helen :-)

[Fernando Pessoa]

This is so beautifully expressed I'm literally sitting here not knowing what to say. Thank you for letting us see the surface and the depth of this man as well.

Sigmund Freud: "Where id was, there ego shall be."