Catharsis - 4

'Just to talk...'

 

Catharsis - 4

 

What lies beneath is the only

Shine of my stay

 

What gets called that now, “you can say” never

Deems to be the way,

 

It can be a rule, not the path

 

When I see; I look around and find

My eternal treasure – words!

 

At last, I make sentence out of those words

I make my say to all

Like a listener…

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i agree with the others... this was an enjoyable piece to read.

[Gandré]

Here you were purging of emotional tensions of an unwating feeling and memories she said "you can stay" but it is not as the "please stay", I can 'zense' your sadness. beautiful small piece. releasing words is something - a grant freedom.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and telling. Wonderful title. Purging your emotions through art is such a beautiful undertaking and you have expressed that so well in so few words.

'Wonder begins in philosophy and wonder is the duty of the philosopher.' - Aristotle.

Thank you for this - I adore it.
Love and Light,
Siddartha

[Christina2]

I'll be honest, I don't understand it all.
I get the end part though! :)

[Leah Elisabeth]

Well done. This is an interesting poem. You have a descriptive way of expressing yourself. Keep up the good work!

[Kitty]

This was an enjoyable read!

Keep up the good work.

Josie

[Vanessa]

For one, my complete favorite line of this seems to be the first; the end of the begining(what a strange phrase) is rather captivating, in my mind.

I wonder if the second and third stanza are meant to be connected. Are they?? A period would be a nice connection, if so.

Fantastic poem.

//Vanessa Alyse

[Ray Hamilton]

Keep writing enjoyed
Ray { Not a Poet }