As it is

For life, and no-life...

As it is…

 

Lots have gone into the middle land

Asking for alms and lands

Lots still stay

Asking for life to grow

Others feel the light inside the dream, and

Sometimes in no-sleep

 

Still some say

Life is full of virtues

Just because it has no real implications to them

 

Just because they want life

Like it is for them!!

Reviews

[Karen666]

You are a philospher lol i like

[Gandré]

Life is full of virtuesJust because it has no real implications to them --------- this I loved. A nice, sentimentality... all is repeating in loops...and developing in new loops. what a wonder. great poem. thanks, dear friend raja.

[Ivory]

Gave the reader alot to think about in this short but powerful piece.
Though good like it is, i think you can add to it.
Still a very good write... and thanks for your reviews ; )

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i liked these lines
'Still some sayLife is full of virtuesJust because it has no real implications to them'
i think you wrote the piece well...

[SN]

I think for the subject treated and the way you treated it, you did good keeping it short. It makes more of an impact. I enjoyed reading this, I enjoyed the stamp at the end "Just because they want life
Like it is for them!!"
Very nice.

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading it. It was short and simple, best structure in my eyes. Poetry doesn't have to be about overflowing words rather overflowing feelings that has potential to links us all together in this chaotic world.

[Dizzy-Izzy]

"Still some say
Life is full of virtues
Just because it has no real implications to them"

Stupid optimists... who asked them anyway? (K is sporting wicked grin)

Does life really have no implications to said optimist with virtuous life? Is the implications of their life based on the decisions they make? Better decisions than most I'm guessing or their life wouldn't be so full of virtue eh?

Today I am going to see the world with the viewpoint of "a glass half-full" instead of "half-empty." We'll see how it goes. Still really early here... 6:41 in the a.m. Those glasses I am talking about, at times, end up mysteriously broken, usually by midday, so one can't see whether it is full or empty.
(see K's look of complete and total innocense... "who, me?")

This was great Raja... where have you beeeeen?

K

[Dominique]

ok keep writing...and wat about write a story about your thoughts or a monologue...