Bliss and Support

For all my friends!

Bliss and Support

 

It could have been great or worse

Still, man tried to take a feast on whatever he had

Still, he deployed means to satisfy his

Increasing needs

 

For those who have nothing or have li’le to

Fill in the stomach,

For those who said but not achieved

The summit,

For those who failed to nurture their

Hidden talents,

 

It won't be of that much tries

 

‘Tis already done for them �" the rooms of aspirations

 

They can sail on their thirst to create their paradise!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Aspiration in itself achieves hope. You say it well -if not a little hard to understand here and there, but, the thoughts and flow are quite beautiful.

Thank you so much for sharing.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was very thoughtful and uplifting...
But the language usage could be more lucid :)
Overall, great work :)

[An owl on the moon]

Such a hopeful, lifting word for us. Even when there is emptiness, we can look for a time when we will be filled. So glad to see a new one from you, Raja!