In Askance

...but I have cleared all doubts!

 Over the rocking summer or sizzling winter or floral spring,

Over the darkest nights or simmering heats or falling mists,

Over the translation or transcription or taunting beauties –

 

I lie and criss-cross names that’re close to hearts

 

Some say water-marks are forever –

           With or without syllables

           With or without commas

           With or without any correlation conjunctions

 

Over you like dews tore apart from heaven

 

Now, I ask you –

                         You have it or not!

Reviews

[Ruth]

Absolutely raw and emotion overload lol
Beautifull written love!
A really good expression of exorcising amidst beauty!
Great, reflective and clever poem!
I LOVE the way this one is scanned!
xx

[emmajoy]

There's something almost mystical to this .. the form is unusual but makes it unique .. your use of words needs thinking about .. i think i understand .. will come back ..

[An owl on the moon]

You take us on a journey through time and seasons, moving your words over our minds in such vibrant mists. This is beautiful and poignant... deeply touching.