Dew Drop

The first pour of Monsoon-

Edge of a leaf, about to fall

Yet dances the dew drop

Author's Note

Thank you for reading! Let me know what do you think of it!☺

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The season of rain. I liked the way you described her. You create vision of new rain drops that won't stop. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you!☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Confuser]

You are a talented girl. Beautiful writing and thank you. Keep writing. Dale

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you! :)

[Confuser]

You're welcome Raji. Thank you dear girl. Dale

[Jamestown]

It's amazing how some of you talented poets can take few words and express
such vast thoughts, nicely done! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot Jamestown! I have read some of your poems on G+ Poets too. I liked them a lot.

[Mayank]

Very very intense imagery, I have love for short poems with such imagery that play with a readers mind.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you very much Mayank!☺

[Nila M.]

Gorgeous images! I picture the the water drop off of the end of a green leaf. I really like the last line, "yet dances the dew drop". Thank you!

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, Nila!☺☺

[Vishuddha]

The imagery is lovely. I wonder how the dew drop has survived the monsoon.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you, Vishuddha!

[Roshan Nair]

Brief and beautiful,
There's a serene image it left in my mind upon reading.
Great work again anjana :)
Cheers

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you, Roshan Nair! ☺

[Emily]

Short but yet so beautiful!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you Emily for your kind review!☺

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

This is beautiful! A stillness after the downfall being teased by a dancing dew drop.

Just lovely Poet!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, Carol Phelan Aebby, for your kind review!☺

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Raja,

You are showing poetic skill in minimalism. The poem sings like an opus.

Regards,
Al

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

That was very sweet! Thanks Al!☺