I really liked this and thought it was very creative. You have pushed the lines of normality and knocked the dust off the formal style with this. I love to see a writer work within their own ideas of what is abd should be and not fall victim to trying to force the flow of thoughts into something that has no life of its own. You have written something different and wonderful here.
"Why" is a potent word
Just leave it suspended
It can evoke varied responses"
It's almost as if the question mark was designed for just that...to leave "why" suspended. ?
It's like a little hook that allows the single-word question "why" to dangle from the subject.
I adore the way you view things, and your writes always inspire much thought.
WHY? -- A question that haunts us all....we are always looking for answers to these queries....but do you know why??
There....back to square one :: WHY ::
Well written and brilliantly expounded....Fantastic! Thanks for sharing!
I agree with my friend, Robert. This is very creative..very unique. How much better our life would be with the why...or would it ? Why helped the US cross the unknown west and start new cities. But, mostly "Why " causes frustration and doubt. Great piece, Rain..
This is definately food for thought. It is a powerful write. The structure adds to the work. You take us beyond the norm with this in many ways. Well done.
A very creative and enjoyable write, I enjoyed it.
As a mother, I hear that three letter word quite often. "Why is the sky blue?" and "Why does butterflies flutter?" and then there is my Sam, "How many tons of CO2 gas is discharged into the atmosphere every year in addition to pollutants such as CO, NOx, H2 S, hydrocarbons, ash and other residues?" LOL
Fascinating and thought provoking, excellent writing!
Flickering and blazing,not yet blown out in the wind...
the flame has to sustain itself when the rains set in...
Beyond norms and overrated sanity
" We look before and after
And pine for what i.. more..