The time

short poem

The time we talked was time of heaven

last we talked was on February seven

My heart get flattered with all your expression

but now I can only feel your impression

 

 

Author's Note

short first poem here please give feedback

Reviews

[Madison Rose]

I like this short poem, especially the last last line "but now I can only feel your impression". This is a very interesting idea, and so true, because when people are not in our presence, we only feel an impression. This is a well written poem, great job :) I would love to read a second poem about your impression of her.

[Ramit Taneja]

Thanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me to write more. Thanks a lot now surely i will write more asap :)
I had written many before but in Hindi language in english this is my 4th one and 1st which i let other read :) thanks again

[Ramit Taneja]

@Madison Rose i have written second too.