for the grief is all mine

this poem is composed from my heart,,, its my feelings

you hurt my heart,

whenever we part...

you tore me apart,

when we part.......

you made me a sachet,

and threw me away...

the days are gone

of saccharine love...

the days that came,

are of bitter tears...

you broke my heart

with a sabre sword.....

and never looked back

to see the sanctity of a friend....

i grin and bear it

for the grief is all mine

i'm in a groove....

not able to move....

but still i say

i liked you a lot....

the happiest saga

end in grief....

for the two friends,

had broken apart

the thread of friendship 

is so thin 

both of them...

never knew that............

Author's Note

when i lost a friend i was so depressed...... i expressed that in my words... its my poem

Reviews

[Jo Todd]

You repeat yourself alot in the first few lines with Part or variations of
The line "you made me a sachet" doesnt really make sense
You dont need to use ellipses all the time
the line "I liked you alot" is very lazy writing and something usually avoided, try being more descriptive, you dont like something you "adore her, like the tide adores the moon, its ebb and flow dictated by her movements alone " or something.

[ramu]

please let me know your openion......