Man, Your Bold!

A Poem by Rana trad

It describes how a man's attitude changes after he loves someone else...

How come your arms are suddenly cold ?

No more caring gestures or romantic words.

You used to give me everything in this world,

Now, you're telling me all the flowers are sold?

You used to help me with the bed sheets; to unfold.

Now you give me your hot cup to hold ?

...Man, your bold!

© 2010 Rana trad

Author's Note

Writen on 2:43 Wednesday 4/August/2010

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DamienHino

yikes...the second to last sentence made my eyes pop haha good job

"Now you give me your hot cup to hold ?" loss of respect nice poem

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.A.N

You're good.
Seriously, I love this.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on August 4, 2010
Last Updated on August 6, 2010

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Rana trad

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I'am 17 yrs old and I started writing poems recently; though I've wrote a few ones before but they were only for school purposes. I would realy appreciate ur comments even if they weren't encouraging.. more..