Re-applying Aches

Pains that hurt you emotionally

Everyone has been hurt all the same
people playin with others emotions is insane

makin people have aches and pain

 

growing up good is hard to do

especially when war is all around you

people close die and u turn blue

almost as if you just got the flu

 

your life starts smooth moving like snow flakes

then starts moving into lies and fakes

all the agony and pain it makes

apply to these re-applying aches.

 

 

Author's Note

Comment pls cause this is a poem I made for review I wanna see your opinion on it

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes this world is filled with pain and war...but we can still be raised right...we just need God in our lives to guide us through life for we all need a helping hand...so we can see more than these hurts and pains.
Great Job :)