I Want My Damn Money!

THIS IS A FICTIONAL POEM.

You borrowed four hundred bucks and now you say you can't pay it back.

You're really pissing me off, don't make me order my two goons to attack.

Stop that crying, it won't help you to beg.

Gimme my money or we'll break your legs.

I want my damn money and if you don't give it to me, I'll get mad.

You're about to get some broken bones and that's just too bad.

I'm a loan shark and you'll learn that loan sharks have no class.

Gimme my money right now or I'll break my foot off in your a*s!

Reviews

[Derek29]

This is one of the better poems! An enjoyable achievement.

[Laura Lynn]

While we all feel this way from time to time, I do feel that it is hard to get a picture of the entire situation. Sometimes a person has the ability to pay the money back and sometimes not. It is very frustrating and makes no sense at all why some people make more than others. I don't get that, but whatever, that's how it is I guess