Memorized

Trace your hands
about sinful skin
if you dare
forbidden fruit
dripping with desire
strength of stench 
dog with a bone! 

Somewhere deep
in the crawl-space of time
buried tracks

of your tender touch

pass through

on the hunt...

dig-dig-digging

Earth moves

grave opens 
sky took still
under water rivers
immerse fears
new-born tears 
replenish cup of desire

Devil's advocate

alive in lucid dreams
sowing seeds of waking love

anew abandonment
protect change! 
In the palm of life's veracity

The birth of you and I

 

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, another wonderful write filled with such sensual promise. Your gentle words paint such strong images on the canvas of the mind. I think it is time for a cold shower. This is an outstanding write filled with such creativity. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always....Mike.

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely work, such imagery and vivid stanzas. The last two are just a knockout, sensational.

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you very much Andrew for your wonderful review, much appreciated!

[Crowley]

A brazen and steamy look at desire and temptation. The wanting and the not knowing. You used some great words in here that punch hard in both directions of want and doubt, but ultimately the wanting wins out almost every time. Great piece.

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Crowley just found your review thank you so much for catching the feel of my thoughts behind this one. Truly appreciated!
Rapture

[Phill Oz O'fee]

An emotional awakening of fervour poetic prose - just meant for two to share - what a pleasant read and wonderful write - good one my friend … :-)

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you Phil for your wonderful review!