Eve

A Poem by Rapturecapture

31/12/89 An ode to my daughter Eve with all my love

Forty words

A labor of love sent with wings from above
heart of a Mother!
with god's design etched upon her sleeve

Each new year

she reveals a world of wonder
a future built on love
I had never known
Till Eve.

© 2018 Rapturecapture

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augustus

A few words can mean so much. Yours are a delight to read. Well done! I'll be following your work with an erect penis and anticipation!

Posted 2 Years Ago

shadrach hah

Hi Rapture, what love to sing to your daughter. What joy to fill her soul when she reads your mother's heart. This is exquisite poetry, a poetic gem. You say so much within forty words. A joy to read. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Phill Oz O'fee

Exquisite poetic tribute to your daughter - its what creation is all about - near on miraculous! Great share my friend and lovely forty word format … :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Hi Phil thank you so much for your most thoughtful review! very much appreciated!
Rapture

Chris

Is there life beyond when the child leaves the nest... and we find their paths seldom include our own unless it is at their beck and whim?

Such memories await our tears in the night as we miss them.