Black hole

I would like an honest opinion on my poems as I'm planning to publish them on a large scale and would like to see if it's worth it or I need more practice

Wanting to disappear,
Into the black hole.
Losing the sight of the outside world,
Drowning into the emptiness to feel myself.
Creating my own world is much better.
Spilling my imagination of life into the blank black space,
and living in it is better than the reality,
which is more worthwhile than the colours here.

Wanting to disappear,
Into the black hole!
Your darkness seems like home,
just like I wanted.
You are the hope with whichas I can fill my emptiness.
Your darkness is my need.
I Promiseing I willould stay until this world of ours gets coloured,
A better world is here in thise pitch black place.
Wanting to disappear
From the colours now here!

Author's Note

I would like an honest opinion on this poetry as I'm planning to publish