Scars

I would like your honest opinion on my poetry work as I'm planning to publish them on a large scale and would want to know if it's good to go

Refrain trying to conceal your scars
your scars are invisibly visible
Your silence echoes deep inside you
I can hear your scream when the sky thunders
I can taste your tear when it rains
I can feel your hug when the wind blows
I'm not with you but around you
You have made me imperfectly perfect
You are the ray of hope in my life
Like the stars up there
The stress that you have because of me
Is just my love to you

Author's Note

I would like your honest opinion on my poetry work as I'm planning to publish them on a large scale and would want to know if it's good to go