Water Drop

Just a short little poem. The feeling of getting completely soaked by the rain.

 

I remember standing
in the rain.
There was water
everywhere.
I could feel
one long drip moving.
Freezing my spine,
washing my butt,
and squishing my shoes.

Author's Note

Comment if you want:) This is a short poem about standing in the rain, which is something I wish to do more often.

Reviews

[Labtoad]

I love the playfulness at the end... :-)

[augustmoon80]

Yuck, I hate the rain, I really hate the Squishy shoes! Well done!

[reminder]

A bad situation with a contagiously optimistic slant. Well done!