Fly

A haiku waiting. To be read by somebody And then forgotten.

 

A dog leaps higher.
Over fence, further away
until she is gone.

Author's Note

Just a simple haiku. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Blue Eyes]

Short but interesting, i like it.

[Labtoad]

As a dog lover and owner...its incredibly melancholy. And with so few words. Good job!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I can picture the scene, which to me , is a good poem or story. Very nice!
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go look for my dog. :>)